@Ridiculous
I've read your comment on my rating and wanted to make sure I give the best possible feedback before there is a potential update. Keep in mind I'm very picky and critical here, the scene is a masterpiece already.
So here is a long list with:
DETAILED SCENE IMPROVEMENT SUGGESTIONS:
Overall I'd try to turn this into a reusable subscene if possible.
Simple because I'd like to use this amazing animations in all kind of environments.
I'd remove the entire environment, including the bed, music, etc.
Just keep the 2 Persons (move them to 0,0,0), logic and UI-controls.
I'm not sure about lights, because they would 'conflict' with the already existing lights when loaded from another scene.
GENERAL:
-rename the Person Atoms to make it easier to identify the 'male' or 'female'
-male Person > Plugins > ImprovedPoV > set 'Clip distance' to 0.05
This solves UIButtons on the right side being unclickable in POV for me.
-fix messy alignment of the UIButtons right side
-male Person > Plugins > Passenger > set a Toggle Key (I use F4)
-remove the 'Passenger Off' UIButton an turn the Passanger Button Logic into a toggle and name it
'Passenger (F4)'
-the veiny penis texture does not look good, I'd remove it. It also removes a dependency I think.
-consider adding a hint text for optimal VAM / scene configuration settings (soft body physics)
LIGHT:
-Avoid the shadow on the girl coming from the light shining though the 'window bars'.
-There is an animation where the girl leans forward very close with bad hard shadows.
The light setup should make sure she is will lit in that pose too.
-Use 3 active lights max to avoid performance problems.
-Avoid nearby close tiny light sources, it will create harder shadows.
Especially for girls we want soft light for a smooth skin from a larger light source.
Yes this is difficult to replicate with VAMs simple light system.
This is just like in real life. A tiny light source looks ugly.
Imagine using a flashlight on a face at night.
-Move light controls to right side. Replace on/off toggles with value-sliders for light intensity.
-I'd remove the colored light + logic.
-I suggest using 2 point lights from the sides carefully placed to avoid any hard shadow in all girl poses. They should be far away.
-A spot light from behind her aimed at her upper back and head only. This should add a nice 'shine' contrast. Very useful for dark hair in darkness.
AUDIO:
-if possible (?): add UIButtons to change girls voice (VAMMoan Plugin)
-I'd remove the music
-optimization: in case the music stays in the scene I'd try to use a better audio-encoding like Opus, unless the Unity Engine does not support it obviously. MP3 are outdated and unnecessary large. I'd suggest Opus with 96 KBit/s. I can help with that. Not supported by engine.
OTHER IDEAS:
-using a belly bulge plugin (I've tried an automatic one that did not work)
-female Person > consider adding Hunting-Succubus FemaleBodySmootherTessellation. (Tested, works)
https://hub.virtamate.com/resources/female-body-smoother-tessellation.892/overview-panel
-give this scene a better descriptive name before reuploading, something like 'animated pov ride cowgirl forward' + TAGS