(Made an account just to rate this scene.)
3.5/5 - Solid scene.
Here are some suggestions:
1) Many scenes on VAM have not been able to replicate this, but please, PLEASE consider adding more movement and emotion on the receiver. It's a pet-peeve of mine when plugins/assets for a male's sexual gratification exist and a ton of creators always forgo it and prioritize their female subjects. I get it; VAM is full of great female looks and models, but I would really like for you to focus on male subjects as well. So, moaning, facial expressions resembling pleasure (struggling to last, ecstasy, etc.) would be really nice!
2) Add a 'Day' mode. Evening is nice, however, night is a bit lackluster because the lighting isn't strong enough. The table lamp and spotlight simply aren't enough, but do a decent job of capturing that sensual feel, which was probably your intention.
3) Extended/more detailed animations. Much like the emotion and movement of the male subjects I wrote about earlier, clitoral stimulation and kissing is a big, fat FUCKING W in my book. A ton of your animations in this scene can allow for these sort of details to work. For example, the first animation when you load up the scene shows the female subject stroking the male subject, you can add some minor details such as licking or kissing the tip, moving closer for a tit job, etc. Another example, the newly added table lamp doggy position is the perfect position for clitoral stimulation and kissing.
4) Progressive sweat and pre-cum. You should consider adding sweat depending on the length of a session or simply the speed of an animation and have the sweat and pre-cum stay on a character. You already have an option to load/clean up cum, might as well try it out with sweat and pre-cum.
5) *Personal request*: Not important, but why not add a little storyline? Similar to the premise of a TushyRAW/BLACKEDRAW scene. That would really set the mood for this scene. Jumping from one location (i.e. a bar or club) and moving to the room that is used in this scene (You could fade out and into this room, or you can make it spicy by adding a make-out session between the two subjects).
P.S: I understand I'm laying out a ton of ideas for you, which inevitably means a ton of work, but take your time. This is already a solid scene with the potential to be one of the best on VAM! Already a great first impression with this scene, can't wait to see your future work!