Alright, while I'm rating this up, I think it's a mixed bag. The good first:
- The positions and actions are well-chosen. I'm a big fan of lap dance scenes, and you've clearly got a grasp on what makes a good one.
- The lighting isn't complex or over-ambitious, which is nice, cause some people go way overboard.
Now the bad:
- The sound mixing isn't very good. The voices are almost drowned out by the music. The ejaculation in particular is WAY too loud.
- The deformation of the girls' faces during the blowjob sections looks rough. Frankly, I think that's just because the cock is way too big. There's no need for the dude to be scaled up, imo.
- While the actions are good choices, they're mostly just up-and-down motions. Could use some variety.
Things I don't personally like:
- Please, for the love of all that's good in the world, don't have male voice clips in a scene which is only meant to be played in first-person. If I'm projecting into a scene (which is the entire reason I'm even interested in VaM to begin with), the last thing I ever want to hear is some dude moaning in my ear. At least consider making a toggle button for it.
- I get what you're going for with the robot voice, but it's not sexy - just silly.
And the way you wrote the review shows very clearly what you liked or not. I really appreciate that, because it makes it much easier for me to understand what people actually want and what to do next !
Thks u !