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VaM 1.x Scene script review

Threads regarding the original VaM 1.x

Aipas

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Finished writing the script for my first Satin story.
English is not my first language and I'm not 100% on some more technical terms I've used. A second pair of eyes could also provide feedback on intelligibility, clarity, pacing, etc.

Anyone up for a quick review?
 
I like reading so I'm game. Also if you're not sure about a term or contextual use in another language there's chat gpt that can help with that.
 
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