Patricia DFC

Scenes Patricia DFC

The entire time she put her hand on the window I was hoping it would not break. Lucky for me it's VAM and not RL, but the thought was still there. ♥♥♥
vamurai
vamurai
Yeah... it wasn't ideal. This is definitely the scene I am least proud of. It had a very hard start to life due to the business with losing the original apartment because of a bad license, then losing the actual look because of the same problem. It was a chore to take all of the action I'd animated and plop it into an entirely new space with new lighting needs, having to try and recreate the look from scratch... I'm glad I got it released, but man did it almost turn me off to the whole thing in the process.

The glass may not be real, but the anxiety that put her hand there certainly was! Haha.
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probably the best ever
vamurai
vamurai
I'm glad you like it!
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Amazing...
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vamurai
Thanks, I appreciate it. :)
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wow incredible scene
vamurai
vamurai
Thank you!
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I looked through all your scenes and the side ride is definitely the best imho. For this one the d seems to be misaligned after like 10 seconds and plops out of the action, no matter how many times I realign it.

I can also not hear any female voice, even though there seem to be some facial vocal animations. No idea if thats due to my setup (valve index)

Nevertheless your animations are top notch, I would argue that it can easily compete with mocaps. A smoother transition between the chest breating motions would also help the realism, since it seems to switch inbetween two preset states.

If you do some storytelling and drag out / extend the action you could definitely monetize your great content.
vamurai
vamurai
Interesting. I'm sorry that this one isn't working well for you. There were a LOT of things I'd done wrong with this animation, being my first "big" scene. I learned a lot between this and my second scene (Last Goodbye) so it's worth hearing this feedback, as I am sure to have missed stuff.

Audio volumes are still tough for me. I know everyone's settings are different, so I just try to balance what I can hear through speakers, and what I can hear through my headset. Even still, balancing music volume with breathing volume, orgasm audio, sex sounds, etc etc. It's daunting, haha.

I think the chest breathing animations in Life are not well-suited for this type of animation once they get heavier. I've had a lot of breast morph freakout in nearly every scene I've done. It's not just life, either. Most of the breathing animations seem to have the same problems. It's probably something I'm doing with my chest animations in timeline.

At this time, I'm not really interested in monetizing, though I've obviously considered timed content like AcidBubbles and other creators do. Truly though, to keep with my theme of "intimate sex set to good tunes," I will probably just stick with free stuff for now.

Thank you for your constructive review! I always appreciate it!
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REALLY good. Very steamy scene that has a lot of activity to it yet still very intimate, especially at the ending, which I loved. I feel like a broken record in my reviews of your scenes. I try to find constructive criticism to help people elevate but I have very little to say here. It is all just things that are purely based on personal taste.

The model is too skinny for my taste (but a beautiful model!) so I swapped her out and the animations still worked flawlessly (I did watch it once through with the default model, not doing so to me is like adding salt without tasting the food, it is an insult to the chef). Oh, and I don't like the specular map on the male genitals, but such an easy swap for me, and some love that veiny look I am sure. LOL, I am reaching here. LOVE the work.
vamurai
vamurai
Thanks for the feedback, I absolutely appreciate any and all advice, commentary, and criticism. I have a menu subscribe I've been using for a while now (though this scene is older and didn't use it.) Hearing that there are toggles I could potentially add that might make it easier to customize a scene without "changing" it much, is helpful advice.

Thank you for the review!
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Top notch.
vamurai
vamurai
Thank you!
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Great scene. Smooth animations. Easily switches to other appearance presets .
vamurai
vamurai
That's good to hear. I don't usually think to test other appearances, and with so many precise animations, I often worry they won't work well unless everything on the new model lines up perfectly.

Glad you you enjoyed the scene!
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I vote like idf care, like Patreon isn't there, and outstanding free scenes like this deserve a Croix de guerre.
vamurai
vamurai
Haha, thanks! I don't know how heroic building free scenes is, but I appreciate the praise!
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very well done
vamurai
vamurai
Thank you!
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Good. But Pussy and butt hole expand in a glitchy way
vamurai
vamurai
I mentioned it in an update below, this is mostly due to the softbody physics being off for the male model. Turning them on seemed to fix it for me. I will try to revisit this and work something out, maybe with the collider editor, but at least turn on softbody for Attom for an interim solution.

Thank you for your review!
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Wow, seriously great stuff. Love the setting and lighting. Reposition works great, worked good with other looks I have, cock popped out a few times with other looks but easy to adjust. Great animations. I moved the menu and added a Embody button. One thing that would take it to the top would be to add some great facial animations. Thanks for sharing, hope to see more.
vamurai
vamurai
Thank you for the suggestion! Facial animations is one of my next "stretch goals" that I haven't spent any time on yet. I've focused mostly on realistic body movement, eye contact, and of course the emotion conveyed by "setting the mood."

This was my first big animation, and I've done a few since that i feel are better displays of my progress in learning the software, but there's always room for improvement. I'll absolutely start looking at facial animation soonn, or maybe even revisit this one (or my others) with it!
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woot woot! Oh momma
vamurai
vamurai
I'll take that as a compliment!
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Super sexy scene! thanks for sharing :-D
vamurai
vamurai
Thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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