Music - What music did you use? Suggest a more seamless looping, but it was PERFECT for the scene.
Model body angles - super hot! Maybe it's a kink and I don't know it, but the view of their lower backs while bent over was INSANELY good.
Spotlight - Using sudden spotlight movements both directed my attention AND provided a sense of theatre. AMAZING.
Eyes - Unnaturally colored eyes enhanced the fantasy element without overriding my personal associations with the scene. Nice. Still felt relatable.
Outfits - Expertly selected and complimented the models and what was revealed over the course of the scene.
Duration - Scenes of this caliber could always be LONGER, but even a sip of ambrosia is heaven nonetheless! It was nice not having to click a button to progress the scene, too. Truly cinematic experience.
Model names - Estel and Estela. Nice. Will we be seeing more of them? Great choices.
Recommendations - Watch out for the dick when the model is moving around it; unless it is intentional, don't let the dick get whacked. Partner with one of the mocap creators to make a KILLER scene, and don't be afraid to revisit this one with such enhancements. Loop the music seamlessly. Indicate the scene is over with a sexy "Fin" at the end like a French movie. Perhaps introduce the scene in the same way with the title!