MeganR
Not here to point fingers, but this has a lot of room to improve and someone needs to be critical:
  • warped eyes (common FaceGen problem) > take a look at Eye and Jaw morph fixer
  • visible texture seams for neck and genitals > match diffuse texture colors in favorite image editor
  • removable dependencies:
    • get rid of ProjectCanyon.MorphMerger.2, remove unnecessary plugin on person
    • get rid of Dragontales.She's_Alive.3, seems unused, could not find any reference
    • get rid of both lighting rig dependencies, scene has two local lights only
    • get rid of NoStage3.Hair_Long_upsewpt_Top_Bun, not used
    • after fixing the warped eyes replace the 108MB (!) eye Reflection clothing dependency IAmAFox.Roxanne with the Reflection in (already referenced by the EyeBall Shadow) Hunting-Succubus.EyeBall_Shadow.6 - This was probably not usable/visible before due to eye warp. Adjust 'Surface Offset' for the reflection if not visible.
minor things:
  • delete unused CUA, was probably the photo wall
  • there are artifacts visible around the tattoo and right side could use some touch up
If you want to fix it and need help - ask here or on Discord help channel (faster I guess).
 
Not here to point fingers, but this has a lot of room to improve and someone needs to be critical:
  • warped eyes (common FaceGen problem) > take a look at Eye and Jaw morph fixer
  • visible texture seams for neck and genitals > match diffuse texture colors in favorite image editor
  • removable dependencies:
    • get rid of ProjectCanyon.MorphMerger.2, remove unnecessary plugin on person
    • get rid of Dragontales.She's_Alive.3, seems unused, could not find any reference
    • get rid of both lighting rig dependencies, scene has two local lights only
    • get rid of NoStage3.Hair_Long_upsewpt_Top_Bun, not used
    • after fixing the warped eyes replace the 108MB (!) eye Reflection clothing dependency IAmAFox.Roxanne with the Reflection in (already referenced by the EyeBall Shadow) Hunting-Succubus.EyeBall_Shadow.6 - This was probably not usable/visible before due to eye warp. Adjust 'Surface Offset' for the reflection if not visible.
minor things:
  • delete unused CUA, was probably the photo wall
  • there are artifacts visible around the tattoo and right side could use some touch up
If you want to fix it and need help - ask here or on Discord help channel (faster I guess).
Agreed, it has a lot of room for some streamlining and tuning. Will take a good look at her and try to fix the things you mentioned. I'm def a noob at this and still learning. Thanks for the constructive feedback!
 
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