Scenes myWifeA9_EP2_0

I am sorry to give this rating but this is not good man... Your scene got too many still frames. Model just stand there or doing very simple animation like walking, if want to transition to next scene u just use fade to black and too many fade to black in my opinion. I think u maybe want to replicate drama style but its too much.
I remember u said before at the DevilInLake scene that xinxiu's scenes are your reference. Then u should know the superb smoothness and transition of his scenes. Your story is not bad but need much improvement in the presentation.
Hope u didn get offended and get better in the future.