Sweet mother of jesus. At first I wanted to say that I almost never rate anything but this? This work is truly a masterpiece.
Comparing it to your previous work:
* Speed slider is a huge deal. With "Quiet Girl" I had to do my own homework with Timeline and animation speed.
* Sounds of a party? Amazing, really helps to get more immersive. Especially with rain sounds as well.
* The UI looks far better, it's closer also so it's easier to press buttons in VR.
* The room itself is much better, a little cozy place which looks like an actual room. I love how "small" it is.
I don't really know if there is any room for improvement other than just adding new features.
I have only one idea - add mirror toggle just like with "Quiet Girl" and maybe place it instead of window in front of male character? The angle should be perfect to see back of the second character. That would probably require moving the window a little to the left so it's more centered at characters.