Few issues (I was using VR):
1. Passenger button doesn't work, the button isn't binded to any action.
2. If you decide to fix 1st point - Embody (passenger) in male atom shouldn't have "rotation lock" enabled imo. It made me sick by how much he moves his head.
3. The dialogs show to the left which is inconvenient if you want to keep looking at Amanda. It's like look left, press smth, look right. I was thinking that this positioning has is reason but apparently no. I would suggest moving it between Amanda and TV (in terms of direction)
I would also suggest to disable passenger and leave it as embody so you can control male's hands. It would be much more immersive than just watching how he touches her.
So there's definitely potential in this scene :)