(Made an account just to rate this scene.)
3.5/5 - Solid scene.
Here are some suggestions:
1) Many scenes on VAM have not been able to replicate this, but please, PLEASE consider adding more movement and emotion on the receiver. It's a pet-peeve of mine when plugins/assets for a male's sexual gratification exist and a ton of creators always forgo it and prioritize their female subjects. I get it; VAM is full of great female looks and models, but I would really like for you to focus on male subjects as well. So, moaning, facial expressions resembling pleasure (struggling to last, ecstasy, etc.) would be really nice!
2) Add a 'Day' mode. Evening is nice, however, night is a bit lackluster because the lighting isn't strong enough. The table lamp and spotlight simply aren't enough, but do a decent job of capturing that sensual feel, which was probably your intention.
3) Extended/more detailed animations. Much like the emotion and movement of the male subjects I wrote about earlier, clitoral stimulation and kissing is a big, fat FUCKING W in my book. A ton of your animations in this scene can allow for these sort of details to work. For example, the first animation when you load up the scene shows the female subject stroking the male subject, you can add some minor details such as licking or kissing the tip, moving closer for a tit job, etc. Another example, the newly added table lamp doggy position is the perfect position for clitoral stimulation and kissing.
4) Progressive sweat and pre-cum. You should consider adding sweat depending on the length of a session or simply the speed of an animation and have the sweat and pre-cum stay on a character. You already have an option to load/clean up cum, might as well try it out with sweat and pre-cum.
5) *Personal request*: Not important, but why not add a little storyline? Similar to the premise of a TushyRAW/BLACKEDRAW scene. That would really set the mood for this scene. Jumping from one location (i.e. a bar or club) and moving to the room that is used in this scene (You could fade out and into this room, or you can make it spicy by adding a make-out session between the two subjects).
P.S: I understand I'm laying out a ton of ideas for you, which inevitably means a ton of work, but take your time. This is already a solid scene with the potential to be one of the best on VAM! Already a great first impression with this scene, can't wait to see your future work!
I won't lie, some of those things are currently over my current skill. However I am learning more everyday thanks to the community and experimenting and I'm axcited to put what I'm learning to use in the near future!
Some notes on your feedback:
As for male emotion, I completely understand and agree with you. Too many scenes focus on the female and lack emotion on the male model which could help provide that sense of intimacy (Which I really wanted given the "theme" of this scene. However, I don't think it would fit in this scene as PoV is never meant to be broken. That being said, I do have a scene that I am working with where adding more life and emotion to the male would do wonders. So I appreciate the suggestion and will try to implement it in the upcoming scene.
So I did play around with the idea of a Day mode, however there were some lighting issues with the environment asset that was used (In the original post of said asset I believe the author mentioned this) so I stuck with the default evening mode, and added a night to get that feel of coming back to her place after a date that went well. I could however look into adding the ability to adjust the lights. Creating the menu and toggle states would require a bit of work, but could be worth it!
As for the extended animations, I agree completely. I'm pretty new at animations and timeline, so I wanted to keep things short (less prone to breaking) while I learned the ropes and how animations should "feel" and look. Again though, everyday I get a little bit better. So I'm hoping to improve here as it is definitely my weakest point in scene building.
For the last few suggestions I would love to add that to the scene, and even played around with starting in a bar, however it would greatly bloat the dependency size as most bar/club assets can be quite big. I even experimented by creating walls, floors and custom textures to handcraft an environment but wasn't happy with the outcome. For the progressive sweat, that is a really good idea I might have to implement. In the new scene I'm working on I do have effects similar, such as mascara bleeding over time and saliva slowly gathering on hands, mouth, genitals, ect. I'm really happy with how it's turning out and can't wait to get it released.
Again, I really appreciate the feedback. A lot of these ideas and suggestions are really great and I'll do my best about implementing what I can!