Very nice work, with plenty of potential. For me, the girl's face was in too much shadow when she lay on the bed, but that was easily fixed by rotating Invisible Light #2. In answer to VegasSexDoll's question about linking mocaps, although I haven't tried it yet, I believe Acid Bubbles' Timeline Plugin allows you to create an animation from a mocap, and then the animations can be connected by using the "Animations Blending" technique.