I finally played this and it's prety good!
Nice work sir, scene with story bits are always more entertaining than short porn scene imo.
The issue or tweak I found are :
-No proper Embody option for male and female in VR.
-Both language in one dialogue window is confusing.
-The hostage should dont have any sob sound.
-After stripping the hostage remain in the room for no reason(lower performance)
-Foreplay sex scenes aren't VR friendly, actors are too close from each other(clipping)
-The popup narrative text in the middle of the screen is obstructing.
It's a great scene in anycase, it just need more QoL and more though for VR in mind.