So far, this is your best work for me personally! I’m a huge fan of teasing as a genre, and you absolutely nailed it here! I especially loved the part where the tip was rubbing against her pussy so closely and only slipped in shallowly now and then — such a ridiculously hot detail. I was also really happy to stumble upon the little easter egg; I genuinely got excited because that was exactly what I felt was missing before!
The only thing I tend to miss in a lot of scenes (generally, not yours specifically), as an ENF fan, is undressing moments. If you ever feel like adding some kind of erotic striptease elements in the future, then your scenes would go from 11/10 to 15/10 (at least for me). But honestly, even as it is, this was amazing — your scenes are some of the best out there!