I like the story, environment, looks. I do not like the mumbling, I think that with Nuance TTS SAPI5 voices it would be better. Dungeon scene is incredibly atmospheric with these candle lights and dark environment. But manhood physics not work for me, his ~0,5m lenght is strange and do not want to fit in Nadja´s mouth or other holes. Really like this story style, some final touch (voices, solve genital connection issue) would be great.