1st of all this is split into two scenes, which means two separate downloads which I don’t like, BUT not a bad dance scene. You should piece it together like C&Gstudios does with fade to back trasnitions between scenes. It’s a bit dark for the dance part.
2nd scene:
A little bit better lighting.
Cons:
1) annoying VR menu that moves where I look, PLEASE get rid of that and just have it moveable like C&G or just move it at after you select a scene. Its always in the way kinda.
2) 2) I used a custom model, but some scenes when having penetration didn’t have the penis in sometimes so I had to click another scene and come back to that. Could be my model idk, but I prefer to use custom models that work and I’m pretty sure it works well with other scenes maybe recheck and see.
3) Animations. I don’t like animations that looks like the guy is fucking like a Sims character and going super fast and robotic like. I know you aren’t using mocap but maybe you can download some animations or something and just refine it. Not all the animations are bad though.
4) 4) VR POV angle sometimes forces me to spin around. I usually fix this in other scnes by hitting x on the quest controller to open the guide and then going back into POV, but it puts me still in the same view where I’m looking behind in some scenes.
5. Crown sometimes gets in the way in POV
Pros:
1. Cool Ending
2. Good facial expressions on the models.
3. Good scenery and music
Suggestions:
1) Add an option for mirrors like C&G
2) Get rid of the floating VR menu
3) Have sliders to adjust speed of the animations,
4) Add cum any time button
All in all, just keep improving. You got the story part down for sure.
