Almost perfect!
It became one of my favorite scene.
I really like how you made the "3 steps" : chair sexy chat, shower teasing, and sex in bed.
I also really like when the girl walk around the player in VR, it create a real feeling of being in the virtual space.
My only disappointement, and I really hope you address it... Is that you still fade out the penetration, I think its a major flaw of all your scenes.
Skip to sex shouldnt having the male already pin the girl like she teleported, you really should the penetration transition seamless.
