Definitely potential here. Great job setting up the atmosphere. I'm looking forward to see how this story fleshes out, keep it up. VAM doesn't have to be entirely about sex (only 98-99%
) so a good backstory about why the hero ends up having sex with an android is greatly appreciated, assuming that's where this is headed, of course. And I love the emphasis on VR, if you can drive just one desktop user into VR so they can find out what they're missing then you've done the world a service.