So much better than your first scene. As for this scene. The dress is near perfect. Next time you are in this scene click tab to customize and click the F4 section of dress and click shader tab and hide material. It trims the bottom white part out and was a much better upskirt experience. Love that when in Embody w tracker & passenger on I have to hit your stop button to change scenes. Which kicks me out of embody WITHOUT breaking the scene. However you did it is brilliant. Auto advancing scenes and breaking the scenes because of triggers that screw up everything because I am in my Embody setup. I love your use of EmotionEngine and that you had the sense to not add head control in timeline except for the "Assjob" animation. Again BRILLIANT. Next time you pull the scene up try removing the head control from assjob animation timeline. To me it was more immersive Again BRILLIANT. Another possible animation might be just spin assjob around and reg cowgirl. Please add an audio off button.
The woman looked odd, but in a good way. She looks exactly like someone that was probably the best sexual experiences in my life. She was a savage.... Again, brilliant use of Emotion Engine. It's my favorite plugin. It brings soooo much realism into scenes. It's like since timeline every creator forgot immersion with a realistic character. Consider creating triggers possibly on her right nipple? to get a reaction like bite her lip or say something dirty. Good job. Like a I wrote I hated your JOI scene. I still don't get it. Keep improving . WHy did I take so much time with feedback? Becasue you asked for it the right way, the good, bad and the ugly to get better.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I've never really fiddled with the clothes, so that is something I'll definitely try. I normally learn things by just deciding I'm interested in it at that moment and deep diving, so this is a good start.
The embody thing took a little thinking, but basically it just unticks "enabled" in Embody, then resets the characters pose to one that didn't cause any issues. I did at one point have it so that it turns off collision, and sends a trigger to a delay plugin, which waits a 10th of a second (or so) and then turns collision back on, but I can't remember if I left this on. I figured this out after running through everything and noticing that, having embody on and stopping the scene broke everything. I'm a dev in real life, and I work for a busy hospital, specifically for the Emergency Department. I make stuff for operational and clinical staff, and so everything has to just work. Those people to not have time to press extra buttons if they are not necessary, and they do not have time to understand what they need to do. They need it all written out clearly, and to not be able to press the wrong button, so I really wanted to find a way to make it just work.
I've made the mistake of adding head control in a scene I made just for myself before... I use it sparingly now. I really just needed it to get her to bend forward correctly, and even then I tried a lot of other stuff first.
There is an auto speech off button, but do you mean other noises? I have added a note to my dev board to to this.
My idea for this scene was all outercourse, but I can probably turn that animation around to make it a pussyjob or something. That's a good idea! Another one added to the devboard.
I actually modelled her mostly on my real life partner, with a few changes, and I also find it quite difficult to make good faces and bodies, so I don't put too much into them as I end up making them weird, I'm glad you like her! She's one of my favourites.
I love E-motion so much. I have an issue with it though that it's adding a loose morph to my VARs! I'm trying to figure out how to stop this as I really want to keep it as tidy as possible. But yes, I agree. The person in the scene needs to respond and react to what happening, and E-Motion does that so well. It adds a randomness that is part of why having a real person with you is so amazing - you don't know what they'll do exactly.
Triggers on her person! That's a great idea, I never though of that! Again, added to my dev board. It's so simple, but brilliant, thank you.
I appreciate the feedback on the JOI scene. It's definitely very rough and I learnt a lot. It's the sort of scene I like but haven't found a lot of (I love JOI games, like FapInstructor I think it's called) so I thought I'd make one. I'm interested to know if you just don't like how it works, or if it breaks, or if it just doesn't work for you? I have more ideas for that one, but I need to basically remake the whole thing again to tidy it up and improve it.
I really, really appreciate this feedback, it's really detailed and specific, and has negatives in it without being rude or anything, just genuine feedback. Thank you so much, it's exactly what I want. I'm trying to get better, and I can't do it without feedback, so thank you for taking the time! I hope you like my future scenes and updates!
