Hey! I didn't find you in the VAM discord, maybe you should join and get feedback there!
I've done Oni's guide a few times and the hard part with these characters are the eyes. I personally do a different route using Zbrush and Zwrap instead for the actual wrapping, because there you can freely move the original eyes so that they won't get "stretched" so to speak. It's a lot harder and Zbrush is incredibly hard to learn, but since you've already started with Oni's guide, maybe that's a next step!
I suggest joining NoOC's discord and the official VAM one if you haven't already, you can always ask for help or guides there
Keep up the good work
I've done Oni's guide a few times and the hard part with these characters are the eyes. I personally do a different route using Zbrush and Zwrap instead for the actual wrapping, because there you can freely move the original eyes so that they won't get "stretched" so to speak. It's a lot harder and Zbrush is incredibly hard to learn, but since you've already started with Oni's guide, maybe that's a next step!
I suggest joining NoOC's discord and the official VAM one if you haven't already, you can always ask for help or guides there
Keep up the good work